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Khan Lake is a unique place in the Krasnodar Territory. Если имеется область — то Krasnodar region и без артикля.This place has a lot of beautiful animals, birds (herons, gulls and sandpipers) лучше написать In this place you can see …. Или There are a lot of … . in this place.Also in this lake there are a lot of fish (carp, pike, carp and plovota). — все правильноThe lake has healing properties. — думаю правильноAlso this place has its own legend.Legend has it that when a dip in the lake people are young and healthy — в легенде говориться legend says that… . Если я правильно поняла после купиния люди становятся молодыми и здоровыми. after swimming in this lake people become young and healthy.