Помогите, пожалуйста, с английским языком. Создание проекта

Помогите, пожалуйста, с английским языком. Создание проекта. Мини-сочинение на тему «Мое летнее приключение». Не судите строго, аглийский с 5 классалишь (Вот текст: The first time. I saw the sea this summer, the first time! I, my mother, godmother and her daughter went to the village Katkov Grap near Sochi. We were there for 2 weeks. We swam in the Black Sea, sunbathed. We went on a guided tour, photographed of beautiful places. We were in Sochi and visited the Dolphinarium. We were in an amusement park, rode horses… Those days were awesome! The weather was very good. Afternoon sun scorching heat, the night rain. The sea was raging, so we were not able to go to sea fishing. It's a bit sad, because my mom likes to fish. From this trip I have only fond memories, I learned a lot, met interesting people. I really want to go back there … Прошу, пожалуйста, проверьте! Спасибо! Нужно уже к 5:30 ч. Сегодн дня