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Hobbies.Everyone have spare time. The time when person can do everything he/she like or interested in. Some people prefer to spend their free time slipping at home, watching TV or listening radio; travelling, getting with friends visited galleries, cinemas or gathering something. Hobbies can be different. They divide in to 2 sorts. The first it is when person prefer doing something for example watching TV or travailing. The second hobby is gathering marks corns audio or video cassettes. I listen music, not all certainly. Also it is interesting for me to go travel and walk with my friends often visited new places and it is very exciting. We like to visit concerts and listen our favourite music Also I interested with computers. Sometimes, hobby became a profession for example I have girlfriend, she’s hobby is music and she wanted to be pianist .For all people hobby is something which relax and entertain them. They help people to have a rest. Without hobbies lives of many people will be dale and uniform