Кто хорошо разбирается в английском?

Кто хорошо разбирается в английском. Проверить грамотность и строение текста. Может что-то добавить илиубрать… I would like to tell you about … . She is in her twenties and is very tall, slim and beautiful. She has got golden hair. Hair is long, wavy and very luxuriant. She has oval face. Have a mole on her face. Her nose is straight and thin. She has narrow and pale eyes. Eyebrows are thin and well-marked. Forehead is narrow and open. She has got painted chin. Ears are well-shaped. Her cheeks are ruddy. She has even and perfect teeth. Smile is pleasant and winning. She has got dark complexion.